update 9/28/04
EN 3070: INTERMEDIATE FICTION
WORKSHOP

INTRODUCTION AND COURSE DESCRIPTION

Instructor: Sara McAulay
Required Texts: Burroway, Writing Fiction 6th ed.
Office: Warren Hall 585; Phone: 885-3476
Email: smcaulay@csuhayward.edu
Office hours F '04: M 1:30 - 1:30; W 5:30 - 6:30 and by appointment and email.


GENERAL REMARKS

English 3070 is a workshop in prose fiction, the second step in the series that leads to the Creative Writing Minor, and to the Creative Writing Option within the English Major. It is intended for student writers who have successfully completed English 2070 or the equivalent, and builds upon skills introduced in the beginning workshop. Our work will focus on sharpening and deepening those basic skills, and on exploring a variety of narrative techniques. The goal is for everyone to finish the quarter with an enhanced understanding of short story form, and writing prose that is clear, economical, active and complex. This course may be taken up to three times for credit.

Though our main focus will be on the short story, we will also continue the exploration of traditional and non-tradtional narrative techniques through a series of short exercises, both individual and collaborative. There will also be a good deal of emphasis on the fine art of revision. (Student writers seldom realize how much of writing is actually rewriting, or how important the process is to the success of their work.)

Because one of the most important things a writer can do is read, there will be a short story assigned for discussion most weeks.

Note: I expect regular attendance, and conscientious preparation. You are allowed two unexcused absences. Use them wisely. Students in once-a-week classes are allowed one unescused absence.

Attendance Policy: I take roll. I expect you to arrive on time, with all reading and written assignments completed, and stay until the class is over.

Your participation in the workshop is crucial, and will affect your grade. In addition to carefully prepared written critiques, I expect you to take an active part in discussion of other students' work. The assigned readings are equally important, and I expect you to be ready with comments and questions on them, too.

Reading Journal: You will keep a journal, in which you comment both on Burroway's instructional material and the assigned stories. How do the stories reflect (or fail to reflect) the points Burroway covers? Which of these points do you find helpful in your own writing? What, in each of the stories, do you find effective or interesting? Were any of the stories problematical? If so, in what way? Etc.

Each student will be scheduled for at least one individual conference. Additional conferences available by appointment or via email.



REQUIRED WORK/GRADING

Note: The points do not add up to 100!

Attendance and punctuality: My classes start on time. I reserve the right to give short quizzes on the assigned readings at any time. All work must be typed. Exercises and stories photocopied for class discussion may be single-spaced or space-and-a-half, but please prepare a double-spaced copy for me. You are expected to revise your work. Always attach the original to the revision.

My grading standards and my expectations are high. Would you really want them otherwise?

There is no final exam. You will turn in a portfolio of all your exercises and stories, including revisions.



PARTIAL SYLLABUS

500 word limit on written exercises unless otherwise specified!

9/29 ~ Intro to the course. How to be a really really great Liar. Lies (capital L) vs untruths. Some review. In-class writing.

10/6 ~
Burroway 30 - 47, 57 - 66 ("Silver Water," "Happy Endings"); LaMott 3 - 73.
Write: "Breaking the Frame": Find a picture (photo, ad, illustration, postcard, drawing, art reproduction etc.) small enough to bring to class and not so valuable that I can't take it home for a week (or make a copy). This picture should be of from 1 - 3 people, none of them you, and at least one of them significantly different from you in some respect -- gender, ethnicity, age (at least 10-15 years). Speaking in the voice and from the perspective of this not-you character, tell what's going on in the picture. 500 words max.

10/13: Burroway 74 - 102, 118 - 131; LaMott 74 - 109.
Write: Choose one of the minor characters in "Silver Water" or "Yours" and rewrite a scene from the story from that character's perspective. Remember that "characters" aren't necessarily human, or even animate! 500 words max.

10/20: 157 - 195, 395 - 407.
Write: "Boy": a mirror of Kincaid's "Girl." The messages a boy receives growing up in the culture in which you were raised. Match the length, structure and rhythms of the original as closely as you can. (Hint: read Kincaid's story aloud before you write.)
Reading journals due.

10/27 : 198 - 218; "Bullet In the Brain," 218.
Write: "Breaking the Stereotype": Write a brief scene in which an over-familiar character (ditzy blond, drunken bum, "suit," etc.) is revealed to have an unexpected quality. Please avoid the easy and obvious (whore with heart of gold, etc.).

9/28 ------------------- not updated past this point ----------- 11/3 .
Read Chapt 7, 254 - 268; chapt 8, 287 - 299. Story TBA.
Write Summary leading to scene in slow motion.

Week 8
Read
Chapt 9. Story and written exercise TBA.

Week 9
Read
Chapt 10. Story and written exercise TBA.

Week 10
Reading journals
due.

Note: If you have a story due for distribution, you are granted one week's grace in turning in that day's short exercise, if one is due. The same holds true for your reading journals. This does not mean you aren't expected to do the exercise, or turn in the journal, at all!

Story distribution dates...


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E-Prime" exercise -- no forms of "to be" allowed! Several examples from prior workshops can be seen on the Student Pubs Page. An article in the Feb. '92 Atlantic Monthly, where I first learned about E-Prime, is now available online.>